20.7.10

Broken Record














the beautiful things you always said
still keep playing in my head

a preponderance of sweet, empty words

of promises and lies i wish i never heard

but the words i really longed to hear
were the ones you never whispered in my ear


[One Single Impression]

9 comments:

  1. That's pretty! I like that;~)

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  2. This is a beautifully strong piece. I love the layering here.

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  3. Thank you! :)

    Those CDs were pretty tough. I had a hard time breaking them. Haha. :)

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  4. I love the sensitive yearning in your words! Very beautiful!

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  5. I loved the lines. They express a lot.

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  6. oh! sad.

    feelings so well put in words.

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  7. Thank you Ms. Gemma, Mr. Vishal & Mr. Harshad! :)

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  8. Honesty is a virtue in any relationship. The sting of false words and longing for something more is clear.

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