I shall be counting the days...
A poem which appears to have come from heart..well said.. liked the end line..
I enjoyed this!
Yet, the person would be on the other side, I crashed into the wall, the wall did not budge.
A wonderful piece. Deep.
Nice display of your pause, encompassed by the fortress.
oh !how thought provoking a piece. thank you for this exercise during the night. please have a good new week.daily athens
love this, you are such a talented poetess.what a delightful treat for my breakfast.wow...way to go.http://thursdaypoetsrallypoetry.wordpress.com/2010/11/08/my-sister-lives-too-far-away/here is one of my entries,a poetry award 4 you and thank you for your support on week 9 potluck fun.Enjoy!xxx
Beautiful words goes with a wonderful picture :DI am truly speechless... =3
That last line made me laugh - very nice!Great use of image and words (tho a little hard to read here and there)http://jessicasjapes.wordpress.com/2010/11/08/my-fortress/
Ohhhh... yes. I know this place. THANK YOU! My Potluck poem.
SOOOOO true! Great work.www.mypoeticpath.wordpress.comwww.veggiesyarnsandtails.wordpress.com
there is a certain irony in this I know many people that will end up on just this way "Crashed" I would like to share this on Facebook if you don't mind!
Thank you so much! :)@Amanda: Sure! :)
You can keep hiding behind that wall... liked it so much .. thanksॐ नमः शिवायOm Namah ShivayaTwitter: @VerseEveryDayBlog: http://shadowdancingwithmind.blogspot.com
Very well said Autumn Dear- exactly my mind- :)
Glad to visit you today.We treasure your input at our group poetry efforts and would be thrilled to see you again this coming Monday.Any poem is acceptable, simply share and enjoy...Keep writing, Keep inspiring!xoxox
Some people feel safe back there, don't they? Loved this!
http://itistimetothinkformyself.blogspot.com/2010/11/november-greetings-appreciations.html Special awards for you. Happy Sunday! xxHope to see you at our potluck tonight.
There can be so many interpretations of it. Loved it !
I liked this one - great photos here too....what progam do you edit them in?
thanks! picasa and/or photoshop. :)
So very true!
SO FIERCE AND TRUE. JUST BE STANDING AWAY WHEN THAT HAPPENS. WORDS